All Comments on 'Fairy Summoning Pt. 19'

by maestro84

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Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

Too short!

Griffin_Scout almost 7 years ago

I agree

The chapters are too short. Don't misunderstand me, I think the story is great. But, there needs to be a little more in the way of character development. While Randy and Jinx are interesting characters in theory, there is nothing really there to allow the reader to become invested in them or the situation.

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