All Comments on 'Fake Affair, Real Holiday'

As long as the two carry out their fantasy among themselves, it is a good enrichment of one's own sex life. 4*!

Wasn't sure if I'd finish reading, but it was nicely done. 5* even though I don't like the story type.

cute I guess but to go on "holiday" like that alone actually sounds pretty boring and everything she did was really for him. He owes her a true holiday.

Good story. Is there a next time?

I'm sure many will assume that because you had the power to abuse your husband, you must have. I greatly disagree, and I'm glad you were so explicit in your reasoning: inertia.

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Who wants to go through the reality of setting up exciting fantasy moments that have very little chance of being fulfilled without extremely costly consequences? That's why we have Literotica.

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Instead, the human mind is the source of all the greatest erotic thoughts we have ever conjured. I know this sounds like "No duh!" type stuff, but couples who trust each other enough to fantasize together absolutely rock.

I did get a kick out of this one.

A wimpy nitwit of a husband being scammed by his wife. I love it.

I thought it was cute. Different take on the whole idea. Good job. 4*s

To the author, thank you kindly for taking the time and making the effort to write this story. I read it and enjoyed it.

I note, as per usual, that group of “readers” have decided to rubbish your work. This is unfortunately common in the “Loving Wives” section of this website.

I’m not sure if you are aware of it, but you have a great deal of power when it comes to comments. I encourage you to delete the comments which are rude and useless. You do have that power, author.

Below is the process you need to follow to delete all of the rude comments.

1. Log-in to Literotica

2. Click on Works on the left hand side in the Literotica control panel

3. Locate the story in question

4. Click on the “word bubble” icon on the left, on the far right hand side of the story you have located

5. Locate the comment you wish to delete and then click on the rubbish bin on the far right hand side of the comment in question

6. Click on delete comment, and you’re done.

Trust me and believe me when I say that these trolls will soon grow weary of posting nasty comments on your work if you just delete all their comments quickly, consistently, and without any mercy.

cute

What an incredible story. I was concerned that her husband wanted the fantasy but the reality was going to destroy the marriage as so many fantasies regarding another individual being added will do to a couple. You played everything just the way he wanted even while going off script. It was so nice to finally read something where it is a fun and imaginative story and has the desired ending. I have enjoyed both your story postings and look forward to anything else you create. Thank you for posting your work and the effort you put into it.

A fun expedition into the intimacy that love and an active imagination can engender between a husband and wife--or any two lovers who know each other (and themselves) thoroughly and communicate just as thoroughly in their daily lives. And it was written so well that--while pulling for the wife to do just what she told herself she would--there was just a smidge of wonder at every step of her "holiday" as to whether she'd let herself get carried away and betray both herself and her husband. Thank goodness she didn't--it would have ruined a very positive message we all can take to heart.

You have provided anticipation of the very best sort! 5 out of 5. Kudos and more please!