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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Oh goodness! There are so many things wrong with this story I don't know where to begin. But, kudos to you on your first try! Keep writing and hopefully your stories will get better. Maybe read a whole bunch of other authors stories here and emulate them and find a better style of writing. This was tough to read..... Keep trying you'll get better!!

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