All Comments on 'Fall of '69 Ch. 06'

good to see a new chapter posted. keep writing!

Keep them cumming. One thing though. Doc should learn to appreciate the country if he wants a life with Becky.

Loved this ENTIRE work so far... but I could do without Skinny. Or maybe without the continued existence of Skinny. I'm just rooting for Don and Becky to work it all out.

Masterful writing though, it's been a great read.

I'll be honest.. I enjoyed the love these two shared. It was incredible at time, in the realistic sense.. and chapter 4 (i think) was amazing although unrealistic with the kidnapping. But I really am not liking the turn this is taking.. yes it's mindless fun but it's ruining the connection between the two. Once a third is brought in.. the feeling of magic between just the two disappears, and disappears permanently. It's a shame for me, although I'm sure many will enjoy, as this was sort of the love that interested me, the first few chapters I mean, even though I can't really relate to it. Now it's just becoming a bit meaningless.. and that takes away most of the fun.

I'm not really interested in the series anymore, I wanted to see don and becky develope their relationship more without this just becoming another orgy story

This started out really well. Now it’s a completely different story. The characters have changed so much and don’t seem to be as connected as they were.