All Comments on 'Fall of the Star Sentinels Ch. 08'

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ThemutantcowThemutantcowabout 3 years ago

God I hope she loses!

CrepeCrepealmost 3 years ago

Awesome. It's really awesome how the leader is corrupted by all the allies who have fallen earlier. Particularly liked temptations of Wrath, Envy and Greed... Which is strange cause in earlier chapters Envy and Greed weren't my favourites... Envy's "I envy your purity so I want to drag you down and dirty you just like we've fallen" and Greed's "Take whatever you want. you deserve it" were just too amazing. of course Wrath inducing her anger to make her savage side come out was also lovely.

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