All Comments on 'Fallen Angel'

by Wifetheif

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Suspending Disbelief

I'm torn. Its a great story. You do great work but....if he actually did purchase that property the Rangers would have know if it occupancy. Through it was a 5 mile hike someone would have made it to ask of he knew of her whereabouts and to warn of searchers in the wood in case of hunting in the area. Though he wanted to cut himself off, that knowledgeable and that far off, he would have had a radio or satellite phone. Otherwise bravo for each step in the story and her reaction and honesty.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I hope part 2 is in the works.

rbloch66rbloch66over 1 year ago

A compelling story!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous