by Rabbitman55
I love this story , its romantic , erotic , a well told tale, please keep up the good work! 5*s !
This story reminds me of an old girlfriend back in the early 80's and my mother telling me to don't bring home any black girls. Of course at the time I had a black girlfriend. Thanks Rabbitman for keeping it real.
So far, very entertaining. There's a lot to work in future parts with the storyline and the characters you've established. Plus, so far it's been very believable. As long as it doesn't get too crazy, it should be a great series.
I’m so happy you did part two!! I can’t wait until Pt 3 comes out!! Such a good job!!!
I usually don't read long story, but I keep reading this one. This story is so good. Please post the chapter 3 soon.
As race is almost incidental to this story, it really should be classified for what it really is- a Romance story of great feeling. With an intricate plot and strong characters, this marvelous love story gets 5 stars.
Thank you for taking the story down some real roads that happen.. This series is the best I have ever read like this. You deal with romance, love, school, society in real ways..
With real emotions and life happening as it does not necessarily for the best .
Such a strong story I felt I was living it. Wonderful. And so on to pt.3
Chapter two is as good as chapter one and I'm looking forward to chapter three.
I particularly like how the author has his characters deal with racism. It is a good lesson we all should learn, and the author makes the lesson easy to handle.
THANKS
GREAT!
PART II IS EVEN BETTER THAN PART I!
I SIMPLY ❤️ THE STORY!
YOU'RE A GREAT STORY TELLER.
SIMPLE YET CONVINCING.
THE NARRATIVE WAS SOOO FLAWLESS.
IT'S SOUL TOUCHING.
THE LOVE, EMOTION, FEELING AND SENTIMENT SO WELL INTER-MINGLED.
AGAIN THE PARENTS-SON AND MOTHER-DAUGHTER EQUATIONS SO WELL WRITTEN. HATS OFF TO YOUR THOUGHT PROCESS.
A PERFECT 5***** FROM ME.
PARDON ME FOR COULD NOT GO BEYOND THAT!😘