All Comments on 'Falling Off My Pedestal Ch. 02'

Hoping there's a chapter 3

If Bubba owns a tattoo parlor he's going to want more then just her having two tattoos. She talks about her birth control. Maybe they make her dump them at some point in one the the videos. Maybe one of Bubba's clubs is a strip club she dances at. Maybe some back room fun. Maybe they turn her out, she want to see if she likes it. If she goes to work for Bubba she'll have to sign a contract stating what is excepted of her.

This long episode could have easily been broken into two part. The second part would start when she meets Stephon and then Bubba, which really accelerated things.

The story feels somewhat natural and believable up to the point when he takes her to the tattoo parlor. Why would she agree to get a tattoo when she barely met the man? And cheerfully accept that she would be owned by black cock, meaning her husband would be denied sex from now on? This move gives away the endgame too fast. Better to build up to it slowly.

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