All Comments on 'False Alarm Ch. 03'

Nice update I'm really enjoying this story. Austin and Naila are great together I can't wait to read more.

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I do love a slooow burn. Carry on!

Nauti Nymph

I like the build up of these two. Sometimes the sizzle is way better than the full burn! Can't wait to see what happens next and hopefully you can find an editor ASAP

Your story and cant wait to see where it goes from here. Niala will have to tell him of her son soon or cause problems.

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keep up the good work!

I really really like this story! Austin sounds like a fox a really cute charming fox. Just so happens I like a guy in chucks and knows how to dress too, strange! And Niala is a very cool sweet lady. I like her, to me I thought she would be a but older (im not complaining here) with the way she carries herself etc! Brilliant, cant wait to read more.

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how they are taking it slow, waiting for her to reveal Sean and his reaction to stay.

that first text conversation was all kinds of inappropriate but extremely familiar (guilty!!) love this story