All Comments on 'Familiar Family Ch. 02'

by Andy_Brandy_Candy

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tedstevtedstevover 1 year ago

I had a difficult time trying to figure out if it was your sister or cousin. Need to proof read better. Other than that good story line.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

First Katie's your cousin, then your cousin sister, then your sister, then back to being your cousin, and then sister again. Couldn't finish reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It has a good plot and it's a good start. I would suggest adding some more details and proof reading it. It really makes it difficult to understand and enjoy if you have to figure out what is suppose to be happening.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

it would be great if you include you sister along with your cousin..sex with both at a time...

WhipmasterWhipmaster6 months ago

Chapter 3 soon?

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