All Comments on 'Family Bonding'

Overall a good story but you keep changing the pronouns from his to her in several different places. But still a good read and thanks for sharing please keep this story going . Thanks

Stopped reading about half-way through the first page.

In the same sentence you referred to Vincent's attributes as "his face" and "her body"

It was confusing me as to who you were talking about.

A good story but you ended too soon!

Please submit additional chapters so we can learn what happens. Maybe the daughter could join but with dad?

Follow up?

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Delicious tale of family bonding. I hope that the son and mother rut like wild animals every night as son and son reach their earth shattering orgasm and the son seeds his mothers fertile womb dad can pop as well and shoot his seed all over the master bedroom floor.after mommy gets pregnant she can suggest to her husband the idea of getting their daughter in on the family fun

Slut Moms are never a turn on, she needs to pick one or the other.

Loved it. Hope you do more

Very hot, but you need to be aware of your pronoun use.

Please edit your story

Very promising debut. Nicely paced and the sex well described. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Nope

Great start but watch the her vs his errors. On to the next chapter. Five stars and a favorite point!

5 Stars, Great story, a few things I have to ask, this is the second story of yours that I've read, you seem to have a problem with interchanging 'him and her' in some places. Secondly you went to some pains holding the husband back in the bedroom while Vincent had his way with his mother, you managed to finally get the dad excited enough to strip off his clothes, but nothing happened with the dad after that. I don't understand. Maybe in chapter 2?