All Comments on 'Family Boundaries Ch. 08'

Love this series and the sexy insanity of the twins.

i'm glad Zoe is getting some love as well. another 5* chapter

I was literally just checking to see if this story had been updated when this got posted! So excited. This has been a great adventure!

That's the kind of family, I want to be in in my next life! 5 stars for your story as usual!

Keep going

Great!! Looking forward to more of this love.

I'm really hooked on this story and can't wait for the next chapter. I especially like the distinct personalities and their individual drama. Love that Zoe is being brought "into the mix." Now, if the twins (and Cait) can break through Vi's emotional barriers... I feel like that's going to be special. Not to mention who the twins will "help" in the future. Exciting. 5/5*

"We belong together"

🔥😍

Another perfect chapter. It's so believable, so beautifully written. I can't wait for the family's adventures. My favorites are definitely the twins. But the whole story is phenomenal. In any case, we look forward to the continuation. Fantastic writer, keep it up. Of course 5/5

Feels almost incomplete without a snide commentary by @ScottishTexan. Ah, well, still a 5.

romantic this chapter.

Don't have Riker get pegged. Otherwise great

Totally improbable, totally insane, totally a 5.

After reading Chapter 7, I realized that I wasn't really in the mood for this one. I actually had to step totally away from the story for a week before I was ready to continue reading it. Surprisingly enough I found myself really getting into this installment. I was most certainly burned out on this family and the break was exactly what I needed. There's one spot in the story that brought back a favorite movie though:

》A witch! A witch! Burn her! 🔥 Burn her! 🔥

》But how do you know she's a witch?

》She's dressed like one!

》I'm NOT a witch! I'm NOT a witch! They dressed me like this!

》Well?

》Okay, so we did do the nose 🥕. But she IS a witch!

》How can you be sure?

》She turned me into a newt!

》Turned you into a newt?...

"... I got better," Riker said.

😆 🤣 😂 😹

Sorry, I couldn't resist when I read that line. 😅 Definitely a Monty Python homage!!!

I'm really looking forward to Zoe bonding with Riker and Izzy. If they became a throuple in a Triad relationship, it would not hurt my feelings at all. I want Zoe to fall for the twins and the three of them stay together forever. I know that you probably won't write it out to be that way, but it's the direction that would make me feel happy. 5/5

Read handcuffed sister years ago , xarth the myth the legend still out here writing good stories.

I don’t want this to end

Seriously! This needs to be made into a movie. Fantastic writing. Hoping this isn't the last chapter...

Stop using the “HeHe”s . Very distracting. Reread some of those lines without it and see for yourself if it flows better. Otherwise a good story.