All Comments on 'Family Business Ch. 06'

I really dislike the 18 your old son, I don’t feel he adds anything just weak and whiny

I want to see Dan train Ashley up, then realise she is the best choice giving the company back to her

When I first starting reading this series I was not hoping for much. Excessive Bondage is not "my thing", this, and the previous, chapter has raised the bar. Well done.

I agree with others that want to see Ashley fully realize herself (and perhaps do away with the son).

Dan seems sick and ready to train his replacement.

5*

Could not agree more with AccelarVester's comment below! Now the story is taking shape. I am also wondering if Ashley's father had requested his friend Dan to "look after" his widow (he must have been aware of her obvious short comings) and mentor his daughter (recognising her potential). Do see there may be a problem with Zack especially if Dan's sickness turns fatal. Some interesting dynamics going forward. 5 stars.