All Comments on 'Family Cravings Pt. 01'

Very well done. The pace was good, lots of potential for further story line, can't wait for more. 5 stars and fave story.

Regards; max052

Great start another entry soon please

Not a single fake thing made this story good. It would have actually been better without it...Kardashian asses are fake...and both guys are total asshole...but the unbelievable fake stuff you added for no reason made the story very hard to read...almost like trying to hard...tAke it out a this story would be one of the best ..even with the unrealistic body types and sex

Great story. Need more soon.

Very hot story. Please continue posting more chapters.

I look forward to seeing future chapters.

Good story , hope there will be a lot more chapters.

Since Mar appears to be very submissive I wonder if

Brittany and Candy are too ?

Kaley seems eager to be one of Jesse's women

I wonder if the power dynamic in the house

will change and which of the women will be Jesse's #1 ?

That it's been so long without part two

Really enjoyed a little of all I like but not over powering. Really enjoy the sneak watching by the daughter. Hope there is more.

Needs finishing.

Truly loved it. Cannot wait to hear about Jesse taking control of his sister in law and neices permanently.

No fucking? Nothing but continual blow jobs is quite BORING . . . .