All Comments on 'Family First Ch. 06'

This was a pleasant surprise to find. Welcome back!

I feel like there was a lot of things that got skipped over in this chapter. Like how Nathan suddenly can shapeshift? I get that he's got a lot of weird powers, but a lot of stuff has kinda been glossed over or just "oh yeah, this happens now" in this chapter.

Still a good read, can't wait for more!

@Fire_Hazard

hmm, he can shapeshift now, wonder what that's about...

Thrilled to have you back! you write like no-one else and pick subjects like no-one else. Thank you for continuing the story!

Great to see you posting again. Haven't lost a beat please keep them coming, left 5 star rating! There is a lot of fruit left on this family tree

Great to have you back! Hope we get to see more of this and JLM.

Glad to have you back! Wonderfully hot with some spooky overtones. Very interested in what you do next.

Any hints on the next release?

Hope you choose to continue writing! Thank you so much for this chapter and hopefully look forward to more! Thank you for what you have written!

I truly hope you continue to write. Thoroughly enjoyed this story and hope it continues. 5 stars for the whole series. Thank you for sharing and keep up the great work.

Please continue. Story taking an interesting turn

Dear God this is practically criminally good.

Glad to see you back and writing, I love your stuff. This is not at all how I saw this story going, but it's hot and I'm to follow wherever your words take us!