All Comments on 'Family Issues'

Good story line room for a few more chapters

Hmmmm

Looking forward to part 2

i like the story 4 out of 5 stars , but it could have continued to include them making love and more...

You can’t leave it there!

Keep this going.

Can't wait for the next installment.

Love your story, can't wait to see which way this will go.

Keep writing, looking forward to the next few chapters.

Looking forward to the next part.

My first attempt at writing erotica - very happy that you're all enjoying it. Chapter 2 has just been submitted for approval; provided that my imagination can keep up, this will be an ongoing story. I'd really appreciate any criticism (hopefully all constructive)., but the main thing is for you all to enjoy. I would like to know your opinions on the female characters -