All Comments on 'Family Night'

The shower scene left me weak at the knees with anticipation! My showers will never be the same!

MM

This might not be extreme or excessive to some, but it is beautiful. You can feel the love emanating between Melinda and Em. A slow burn towards a volcano of passion and desire. For me, this is such a refreshing angle.

**FANFUCKINGTASTIC**

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A great concept: an evening just for the two "family members."

Very warm and appreciative story. Nicely positive.

Continue writing.

The mass of detail on page one helps a bit with the realism of the setting, but one might need a rule to determine when detail is non-useful.

What this reader likes.

(a) warm, appreciative relationships.

(b) partners living (and loving) nude.

Thanks for the nice story.