All Comments on 'Family Reunion Ch. 02'

Love the continuity and the ability to bring feelings up on both sides while keeping the sex hot. Good job, kep writing, you are good at it!

I really like this a lot. I love an erotic story that does have sex in it, but also has story and depth. I'm emotionally invested now, so please let Zoe and Finn have their happily ever after. I would love for Jesse to have a story where he finds love, too. I feel so bad for him, and would love a man like him! And also, when I saw that Finn's name was Phineas, the 'Phineas and Ferb' theme song started playing in my head.

I'm loving everything about this story so far. It's funny, sexy, erotic and makes you think. I can't believe that Finn had to go to Jesse's house to avoid rubbing one out! I died! Great job so far.

Getting better. I felt like chapter 1 drug out and there was too much character development. This was much better.