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by Verhaalen

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Marvin2017Marvin20173 months ago

One of the better stories I’ve read on this site…5 ⭐️ easily.

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sp9983sp99833 months ago

None speaks like the woman in this story does. Have me, mark me inside? This is what you would expect from a cheap romance novel. We readers don't want romance, we want it carnal, raunchy, and graphic.

Rob_RoyaleRob_Royale3 months ago

Very good. Loving and sweet. I'll check out more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Your story ended at just the right point. The objective of the story was for the two of them come together for sex. Following that with more would be anticlimactic and ruin it. It's your story- tell it the way you want.

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A short story writer in various genres. Of Dutch birth but living in the UK for many years. I appreciate comments but do not respond to them, sorry.