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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Boring

LimnophileLimnophileover 1 year agoAuthor

@Anonymous - Your only criticism is 'Boring'? I found two typos after it was posted, the characters are mostly one-dimensional, and it's only written at 5th grade reading level. But if you think a foiled robbery, a surprise pregnant girlfriend, and death threats from a lover are boring... -shrug-

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

i mean to be fair it is kinda cliche

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