All Comments on 'Fantasies Fulfilled - Pt. 01'

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mpatt1mpatt1over 1 year ago

Can’t wait to hear more . Hope they do get together

RanDog025RanDog025over 1 year ago

Going to follow to see where this goes. Please hurry and don't disappoint! 5 BIG ONES!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise.

But it's barely a beginning.

And the teasing in the drive to the hotel needed many more details.

And more dialog. She's got these huge tits, and nothing? She doesn't ask him if he likes them? If he'd like to see them? Touch them? Kiss them? Suck her nipples? Titty-fuck them?

Four stars.

velcro_zippervelcro_zipperover 1 year ago

Nice teasing start!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A slower build-up and more detailed introduction would have been better, but a great start to what should be a great series.

explorer256explorer2568 months ago

Wow, same era as you, I’ve had girlfriends that I would love to meet again….like that!!

ExcoachExcoachabout 1 month ago

Superb job-nice storyline and an interesting premise. I like it

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