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All Comments on 'Fantasy Comes True'

by Cdoylek

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So so

Not bad but in desperate need of spell check or a grammar check. ie I knew not I new.

I lay there on top boy played. Get with an Editor perhaps? Good potential. Sorry to nit pick but it made a bit difficult read.

2 stars

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