All Comments on 'Fantasy Family Ch. 01'

Looking forward to se where this is going.

5 stars! Thank you!

Sure you might have added more than just the framework, but then again, you DID tell everyone that you were going to do so. And hey, this is Literotica: 90% of the multi-chapter stories star out this same way. It's great: now I have something to look forward to tomorrow, or the next day, or sometime soon (I hope.)

Please continue - I'm looking forward to see how this "basic framework" plays out!

5 stars! Thank you!

Sure, you might have added more information - probably planned for chapter 2 - but you DID warn us this was a slow-burn and laying down the framework for the story. And hey, this is Literotica where 90% of the multi-chapter stories have a 1st framework chapter.

Me, I'm looking forward to the next chapter and see where this is going. Thank you, again!

*****Great start some very exciting storytelling. Looking forward to future submissions. Thanks for sharing.

I am very excited to see where this goes. Awesome start and new way to go!

5 stars for great potential. Now all depends on what follows. One tip. In absence of an editor, after finishing a chapter, do not look at it for a few day and then check it. This should enable you to catch the bigger mistakes like scentences going awry.

Until your next chapter.

Great start. I enjoyed it enough to want to read more chapters. Hopefully you will continue. 5stars

I like it so far.

Quite interesting. Let's see what you do with it; this type of story comes with A LOT of detailing, plotting, background, etc. which cannot be skipped. So, go for it. Knock yourself out, sir.

Keep'em coming!!!!! Really like this storyline.

Interesting premise. "Vigilante license" seems oxymoronic though. Can't be a vigilante if you have permission from the government. I'm thinking along the lines of privateer vs. pirate during the age of sail.

just read your first story liked it. favored you, don't want to miss any