All Comments on 'Fantasy Man Ch. 07'

this is a really great story and i can't wait for the other chapters.

That was erotic and hot and romantic and sinfully sexy, all rolled into one fabulous chapter. Thank you!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

That was so romantic and hot. Cant wait for the next chapter!

I have to tell you - I don't normally read 'love stories' but this one is so much more than that. I love the way you write, everything in just the right place and put there with (it seems) loads of feeling, as if you had it happen to you. Congratulations on this story, finished or not.

This was just great. You are very talented. I hope that your major is english and that you keep on writing. I really enjoyed this story and you should try to get it published. Top Rate.

Im going crazy waiting for the next chapter of this story!!! I can really feel the heat between the two characters and u r an extremely superb writer. More!...Give me more!!!

Come on where is the rest of this story. I want to know what zach is packing and if he could break bricks with it,lol.

This is a great story it just needs more sex. Because sex is good especially when the two doing it love each other.

And I thought the dream was hot! In this story you have captured in words the true essence of love and passion. I would write more, but I can't wait to continue the story.