All Comments on 'Fantasy or Desire'

by kareniswet

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
6 years

here's hoping you don't write another story for 20 years

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpetealmost 14 years ago
Nothing wrong with your writing...

....pretty white-bread fantasy but no reason not to keep on writing.

oldguyfloldguyflalmost 14 years ago
Great Story

Keep it up, you did good.

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago

1* enough of these stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
What up miss jones. David huh?

Miss jones and everyone.

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Karenisawet whore and Brian is her cuck.

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