All Comments on 'Fantasy Realized No. 01'

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JustplainjeffJustplainjeffabout 1 year ago

I read this story, first. Then, my wife of over 52 years read it. Then, we read it together, and LOVED it even more! 5* isn't hardly enough.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I thought this was really well written and very erotic.

cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

Oh so good, erotic with deep desires finally being shared.

Please continue, more can be explored with them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

More, please!

des911des911about 1 year ago

Looking forward to the next part - this one is great. Thank you

MormonJackMormonJackabout 1 year ago

Loved it. I hope you will continue. Would love to hear about Lin as well.

Jimloves2watchJimloves2watchabout 1 year ago

Definitely more please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

One request: more please!

jkthekatjkthekat10 months ago

well written and thought out!

FresprtlvrFresprtlvr4 months ago

Very erotic and loving story…reminded me of my married life and a few memories of intimate lovers along the way.

Well written…a 5+.

pcman1950pcman19504 months ago

What a well-written gem! Overflowing with sensual intensity and the truth of so many of our married lives. 5+fave.

JS_PhotoJS_Photo4 months ago

Beautiful story - one of the best. Well-written, it moves along at the perfect tempo as they become familiar with each other and realize how much they have in common.

raven_rose_auraven_rose_au21 days ago

.....and this is why we keep coming back. An amazing story!

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