All Comments on 'Fantasy to Reality - Ch. 05'

I keep waiting for a letdown, but the chapters keep shining.

Be careful about the "everybody and their grandma are into it"- trap.

Jenn has urgings... okay. Terryn might be really open-minded, I buy that too... just be carefull that in the end each and every named and unnamed character is into gorean BDSM.

I cannot think of one constructive comment to make. The story is a classic.

To EssEssCeh - Noted and agree. Not for everyone. In fact I am not into every aspect of the Gorean culture myself. We are fulfilling Jenn's deepest needs and desires which, over the years, I have learned are much more common than I realized. I have always had a fascination with women's fantasies and writing about them, or more.

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Though you can tell there are two different writers, they meld so seamlessly. Two minds together with one vision though from opposing viewpoints. Great writing. Great story.

Really enjoying it. Please don't stop half way through like so many writers here.