All Comments on 'Farm Girl Amy Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

need a conuation

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Good start...looking forward to Pt. 2

babaloo92babaloo927 months ago

Interesting premise.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

There are a lot of writing mechanical issues (yeah, I know, editors are hard to find), but the story has good bones and you have achieved a good narrative tone.

I'm hooked to read the next installment.

jonyoungaujonyoungau6 months ago

I loved this series i hope it goes on forever. I have a "Amy" i went to school with who i have in my mind when i read this.

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Straight white male. I have had many jobs over the years, pizza boy, lifeguard, delivery boy, student, construction, teacher, engineer, photographer, and in a hospital. I have worked in the field, in offices, and in trucks. I enjoy the outdoors. Tying women up with their c...