All Comments on 'Farm Hands Have Their Fun'

Good little story, keep it up.

Why thank you so much Anonymous and I'll do my best.

Great story. Well written and hot. I like Jerry, and Jellybeans. I would like to read more about their adventures and what else jellybean gets up to.

Sweet and sour. I'll volunteer to shine that boots if I had the chance. Nice work, honestly.

Better and better. I love the way you’ve infused your lead character with innocence, sexual precociousness and a firecracker personality. A fun read.

Hahaha....... yes, indeed misterE2. Thank you so much, I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story.

Why thank you so much for taking the time to read my story Maydaypilot. Your comments and constructive analysis are truly inspiring. I have been trying to focus more on character development in my stories so I'm so happy that someone noticed. I'm always so excited to see your comments because you're always so thoughtful in helping me find some direction in writing. Again, thanks a bunch Maydaypilot.

Why thank you Anonymous. I'm glad that you liked the story and yes, I think that there could be some future developments with Jerry and Jellybeans, thank you for your kind words.

Some interesting allusion to power. That's an interesting read on a variety of levels. I've never read 1984 but it's supposed to be a good read. Thanks for sharing.

Hahaha, I think that you might be on to something there Anonymous. I'll see what I can come up with and thank you, I'm so happy that you liked the story.

I'm glad you like the story misterE2. I'll keep that in mind in case she gets a scuff.

Thank you so much Maydaypilot. I am so happy that you liked it and yes, I have been trying to pay more attention to character development in my stories so I'm so excited that you noticed.

Interesting how you bookend the story with quotes from Orwell. You but some thought into that story, well done.