All Comments on 'Farm Life is Hard, But Rewarding'

I would like to find a guy with a bigger dick for my wife. I think she would love it.

This was way too quick. I mean you introduce stuff as being a happy young couple then BAM! you throw in the wife wanting another man, skinny dipping, the proposal of a poly marriage and all is well. NO real angst or emotion really.

Awesome story... loved it... nicely written !

Nope. Head to greener pastures. This was awful

Oversell. Studies and reality clearly show these type of twisted relationships fail at almost a rate of 90%.

What a great situation, will suck when he eventually leaves to have his own wife or kids, but until then,,,,,enjoy

Horribly written.

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Quotation marks are NOT optional. For example,

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My wife yelled at him, "You will always cum in my pussy and fill me with your baby batter."

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Well that did it, I shot cum all over the floor.

Even worse, you change POV without any real indication of the change. For example, it's mostly from his POV, but then there's the paragraph that starts

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At first we just worked together, helping each other.

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Which is her POV. The part of " Looked up into my eyes and came clean with what had been happening." doesn't count. It's buried in the previous paragraph, and it's not even a sentence, just a fragment.

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No, you don't need an editor, you need to learn basic English -- THEN use and editor to find the stray mistakes.

This is a perfect arrangement between a loving couple and the hired help. Everyone’s a winner.

Loving wives category.. Humm, your story. Minus zero rating. Wouldn't be there when they woke up the morning. Perhaps Chris left the next day, and never was heard from again. Lots of acres on that farm. ???????

Load of crap.