All Comments on 'Fated Hearts Ch. 08'

can not wait for the next one

Hope Amelie will be fine!

Please give a heads up or post in non consent when adding rape to a story it's not that I can't handle reading about it but the heads up would be nice, and truly it is the easy way to show sick and twisted, it is effective and I did get pisses but there are othe ways to show torment if that's what you are going for

I almost agree w/the previous "anonymous" commenter who said a rape warning might be nice. I'm personally ok w/it but know that some people are uncomfortable w/it. However I strongly disagree when someone suggest that you could have written it differently. This is "YOUR" story and "YOU" get to tell it the way "YOU" want! I really like the story. That Thessa never gave up believing that her mate was out there and that she always knew she would one day escape, despite being repeatedly drugged and raped, shows what a strong female Alpha she will become. And that to me is really what this chapter is about, the inner strength that Thessa has. And oh I can't forget that she made a few friends too, that shows her gentler side. I know I don't have to say it but I'll be watching for the next fantastic chapter!!!!

I honestly didn't think it was that bad either. I could have made it a lot worse than it actually was. That was ony a scene in this story, not it's focus. Keeping in mind that rape is a very serious thing, I definitely toned it down to just the impression of rape (except in that one scene...I know.) because I understand people are sensitive about that sort of thing

-Gia

I agree. i hope Amelie will be okay to. I HOPE Thessa finds Eric!!!! loving this story

Great story!!!! Glad you are finally working on finishing it.

great update. im glad her mate isn't dead. Now its time for them to find each other and revenge what the crazy doctor took.

Yes I am glad you updated and it was great. No because it ended to soon. Thessa really needs to get some "get back" for that ass wipe Dennis. Shake bite and crushed spine is way to easy for him to get by with. Thess or her mate (when they get back together [note the context 'when']) they need to tear that ass up! Like the new friends she made hope they don't get punished for helping her escape seeing as her scent will be all up in their house. I am looking forward to seeing how you bring this all together.

Best of Luck,

~sp~

ps. I'll be watching;O)

I am so glad she found friends to help her get out. I hope Dennis is dead. Will she need to find another witch to counter whatever Pavla is doing to Eric?

please continue. why did you stop? dont leave it like that.

i was so mad when he was raping her that Ash*le Denny, she needs to cut his dick off. yeahhhh