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Great story, but an editor could have fixed the few mistakes. Will there be a follow-up chapter? I, for one, certainly hope so.

I think you did a great job writing this!

This was an amazing story. Well thought out and written.

This is the second of yours and they are a lovely turn on and mostly good to read, sorry to add my penny worth but an editor would really help. Bottom line though is I will certainly read more of yours so thanks so much.

I think you did an excellent job writing this amazing story! Very well thought out and written.