All Comments on 'Feels like Deja Vu All over Again'

by CaptainKW

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Wonderman1 over 4 years ago

Congratulations on your first story

Interesting and I hope you continue to write.

luedon over 4 years ago

"We enjoyed a casual fuck for about twenty minutes"

How does one have a 'casual' fuck? If ever there was an activity that could not be described as 'casual' I would think fucking would be it. The idea of lying back casually while engaged in sex just doesn't seem to fit my experience of the activity.

(At least one of the participants should be active, surely?)

Lue

oldbearswitch over 4 years ago

Nice job for a first timer Capn. Bit too much of of a come bath to be perfect, but I enjoyed the tale.

Keep going.

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Key West regular here

As a long time Key West regular, I loved the story. And yes to those of you questioning casual fuck, yup if it's gonna happen, it will happen in Key West.. There is just a vibe there. And yes Billies had great burgers (and Key Lime pie). We're headed back down in Jan. I wonder where Lexi is staying now that the DejaVu is closed

Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

This brought back a lot of happy memories from the late 70's.

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