by WFEATHER
Would love to read more.
Good story. You don't get paid to write so it's long enough tell these vultures to fuck off.
good, and pretty hot, but fucking WEIRD at the end
....like the change????-pistolpackinpete
Nice but you ended it too fast ant too out of place. like trying to finish quickly, add a better ending and it'll turn out great.
It was good but way way too short.
Too short, and that was no ending.