All Comments on 'Fellatio in a Van'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Sequel?

Would love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good

Good story. You don't get paid to write so it's long enough tell these vultures to fuck off.

dkm25433dkm25433over 12 years ago
what the shit!?!?!

good, and pretty hot, but fucking WEIRD at the end

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Maybe make him/her....

....like the change????-pistolpackinpete

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nice But Bad ending

Nice but you ended it too fast ant too out of place. like trying to finish quickly, add a better ending and it'll turn out great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
NO

It was good but way way too short.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Nope

Too short, and that was no ending.

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