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by Foucquet

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7gvy67gvy612 months ago

I liked it but how did we get to the last paragraph

FoucquetFoucquet12 months agoAuthor

I thought that I had made it obvious in the last paragraph that Julia was coming out of the fantasy and back into reality. Obviously I didn't make it obvious enough.

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70 something male with an erotic turn of mind. Most stuff I write is quite short and to the point. Am always interested in what others think of my writing, that is as long as criticism is constructive. Feel free to message me with any thoughts and/or kind words.