All Comments on 'Fencing Academy Pt. 02'

by AnotherWannabe

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Another Winner of a Chapter.

I normally do not go for the Lesbian thing, but that was just hot.

The fight sceans are well written, with just enough attention to detail, to interest a Fencer like my self, or a lay person. The comparison between Sex and Fencing, is spot on accurate. I hope you post a link to your serious novel, when you finish it. I want to read it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Echoing the Sentiments...

I share the sentiments of those who commented on Chapter 1. You aren't a "Wannabe;" you are most definitely an "Is."

MuqaliMuqalialmost 10 years ago

This is very well written, some of the best stuff I've read (online or off) in a while. So great. I love the word and characters. Can't wait to see how this develops between Adrianna and Lyza!

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