All Comments on 'Fiancé Seduced By Roommate Pt. 06'

My only critique of this chapter would be that it would've been better to read the bachelorette party interaction with Dante from his point of view. Otherwise, you are on fire with this story, keep up the great work!

very good story

I think Amanda is marrying down.

She should have called off the wedding and hooked up with Dante.

Next part one year later?

Rolls eyes. In the real world Amanda would already have dumped Dan. She doesn't respect him.

This is the beste Story-Series of a long Time! Please MORE

Please, let Dante take Amanda on her wedding night!

I loved!!! chapter 1 through 5 but 6 seems like you're reaching too far. It's just an awkward detour from the totally hot tale up till now. Your writing is so good in respect to just giving enough description of the characters so the reader can use his imagination to connect the dots. So many writers are repetitive and over-descriptive in regard to the particular features of the characters. Hope to see a lot more from you in the future.

Great work so far. I hope the final chapter includes her going off birth control and Dante taking his shots

I've really enjoyed this whole series so far - the writing is done well with nice pacing, believable characters and reasonably plausible scenarios. I'm not surprised that there is more to come, as it always seemed unlikely that things could really stop so abruptly. Looking forward to reading more, thanks

Great story. Maybe Dante can fuck Tiffany, Megan, and Lindsey as well as Amanda. It would be especially hot if they also had boyfriends.

Love this series, love this chapter. While my wish list has Amanda getting pregnant on her wedding night and Dan only getting to use his hand pussy; I'll leave creative to the author. Great series again!

Oh there has to be more to this. I’m wondering when she goes off the pill & gets knocked up with his child. Once a women has a bigger cock there’s no going back to a normal sex life. She’s going to be wanting bigger cock for the rest of her child bearing days. Hopefully he fucks her friend good and proper to. Maybe sending her home knocked up.

Like mrwescot, I loved chap 1-5 especially 5 which made it to my favorites! However 6 was a little off for me, I wanted to give it a solid 4 but still I gave it a 5 because I love the series so far. what soured '6' for me was Dan turning into a nothing character, he is essentially becoming nothing more than the narrator of another couples love story or worse... he is now just the family dog and hopefully Dante and Amanda will take him out for a walk once in a while. I have lived a similar story, but wildly different, it was not a roommate and he was not black. I enjoyed it because I was involved, participated almost always and respected within our triangle, and that made it exciting for all of us. and Like chief573, I hope to see Amanda take him on her wedding night. I convinced my wife to do that on our wedding night, but she wanted me to guide him inside her to to convince her I was serious. I may just write about that experience, I wish I was as good a writer as you are. thanks

glad to hear you will finish the story! Thanks for writing!

Niiiice. I wonder (hope) if Dante will get a threesome with both Amanda and Tiffany

Please post the rest of this....I'm so looking forward to it...nice work...you do an excellent job thanks in advance

Author Update: Don’t worry. I will be finishing this story as soon as I am able. Have had some unexpected life developments. Appreciate your patience.

Excellent story. It woukd be great if there is a chance Amanda spend time with Dante and one of his frds

While this is the finish of part 6 its only my second comment. The has been one hot story, the only thing missing for me would of been had the soon to be brides boyfriend and her spent more time fully kissing, satisfying each other emotionally before they are totally satisfied in every way physically .. that would be there own secret of intimacy .. making love not just having sex, after all it was bound to happen. How would her only hours away to become her husband of handled it. For some I think it would of been even a greater visual stimulater than the hickeys.