All Comments on 'Fiction - 2041: A Space Nudity'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I liked it. Really dig the nonchalant nudity, the free fall elements. Personally i could do with more mentions of ass, the curve, the cheeks, the crack. Them seeing his or him noticing theirs, either way. Just a little something to keep the eroticism up.

Lots of promise, but that ending was a big let down though, way too abrupt.

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