All Comments on 'Fifteen minutes of flame'

Popped in and left sated — booty call scene on the couch Intensely erotic, easily visualized. The sapphic fantasy deliberately abbreviated to intensify horniness yet scene not very erotic despite potential. Again, like the anonymity and the way you string adjectives together — never overdone, invariably enhance picture adding reality and often a touch of humor. Drawn in by your style and scenes, so read all four of your short, well scribed pieces this morning. Linkage to Sappho fragments — very nice acknowledgment. Thanks for sharing, hope you intend more.

"launched into his final dives, ending embodied within her and pulsing his prize deep." WTF at this prose, lifted from some early 20th century bodice ripper?