All Comments on 'Fighting Dreams Ch. 01'

This is way beyond dark. If I was in her situation I think I’d just find a way to kill my self, some things aren’t worth living through. Regardless of how very well written this is it’s definitely not for me. I couldn’t find anything erotic about any of this.

Best of luck with your writing

Tess (uk)

Tess, Noncon isn't going to be erotic to everyone; it's not supposed to be. It's supposed to make you feel worried and skeevy and a little bit concerned about what's going on. Sometimes that adrenaline feel is erotic to people. Sometimes its the strength of the hero/heroine to make it through regardless of the horrors despite the fact that most normal people would give up.

You said the same thing of Sold when you read it; that it was too dark and you didn't find the breeding line at the end erotic. But you keep reading things of mine that you know don't suit you if you're reading the warnings I post.

Fighting Dreams isn't supposed to be a pretty feel good set of kink and I've been clear about that from the front page. I put trigger warnings and author's notes on my stories warning people every single chapter for the reason that I know its not for everyone, and I'd rather people not waste their time on a story they dislike the content of.

Why you keep visiting my works when you know my brand of kink isn't for you I still have yet to figure out, but I highly recommend that since is the second piece of mine you've disliked so strongly that you don't read my works in the future.

All the best,

Silver.

Never mind the trigger warnings, it's the idea of judging a work by what makes *you uncomfortable. It's a failure of imagination, to suspend disbelief and live in the story as written. Me, I find this story fascinating, hot, fast paced, and fearless. I'm going to comment after I read more. This is top notch writing and an original vision. Cheers,

~PM

OK OK, so Jazzy is an action star. 'DIe Hard' meets 'Story of O'? And *dark; I ❤️ dark.

And you write beautifully, excellent pacing & vivid narrative voice. I shall certainly read on.

Best, Emm