All Comments on 'Film Studies'

Somewhat confused by this line: "Lubricated with her spit, it felt much better than before, and as she worked his shaft full pelt, she began to run her dick over the head," but otherwise nice story

Came here to say what the first commenter said.

Thank you for the comments. I will be uploading a revised version shortly, and have implemented a more rigorous editing/review process to avoid this for future stories.

a little rushed, need a slower build up

Loved it!! such a cute beginning