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Anonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise.

Meh story.

And, his cock easily slips into her pussy? OK. Then, three paragraphs later he begs her to take his virginity? HUH? Once cock is in pussy virginity is already a thing of the past!

Three stars.

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A few disclaimers: I am not a writer. I have never claimed to be. My stories probably aren't for everyone. I am less interested in the sex as I am about the story and the minds of the characters. Maybe I will branch out, but my first few attempts will probably be written f...

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