All Comments on 'Finding a Roommate Pt. 03'

Wow!! What a ending to this chapter! I love these two characters.

Love it

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

In answer to your comment in your bio …. You can indeed write! Please release PT. 04 as soon as possible!

such a great story with strong characters. thank you!

Great story. Really, REALLY shitty cliffhanger. Who the fuck would say something so negatively leading to such a perfect girl?

@OpenWords - I didn’t intend it to be negatively leading as a cliffhanger, I was hoping it would be read as Adam giving her a choice as he too is quite overwhelmed by it. Hopefully the next part clears that up!

After reading some of page 1, I now recall why I stopped reading this once before. I just can't continue a story tagged as a romance when there is verbal and physical degradation of the so called partner. Never would I call a loved one "whore" and worse. Never would I leave marks from a spanking. This story is not romantic.

So I bet with the extreme pain and all that that she has ovarian cysts. Classic symptoms. So the thing is that she’s on contraception to avoid pregnancy and miscarriage THATS A GOOD THING!!!! That means her eggs are good to go but not her uterus. They can do egg collection and sperm collection and get a surrogate to just Cary the 100% genetically theirs baby! Done deal. Get her older sister for example as there won’t be problems that way.

This solution is a real thing and 100% legal. You also get a baby that’s 100% yours without the stretch marks.

I’m sorry but I disagree with previous ‘anonymous’ comments (8 months ago). A Romance story has heartbreak and struggles. And this story CLEARLY (IMHO) made the case that she desires, approves and enjoys being called “ ‘whore’ and worse “. Spankings can be a sign of love when it is applied in a correct manner. Our society has lost that fact, and the rampant disrespect of basic human decency is the product of lack of discipline. I get that you would never do those things in your relationship and I respect your view of that. I also respect your view of it not being a romance story. BUT, what is romance if there is not a struggle ?

90% of the story in this chapter is sex. While I'm as big of a pervert as the next, I can't get into the character interaction if their entire relationship is based on kinky sex. You hint of more under the surface, but never bring it up to the top. We'll see what the next chapter brings...3.8*