by BadWriter75
I love the story, but with the time between chapters, I lose track of who is who with all the real names, nicknames, and whatever names, I can't keep up and I'm quickly falling out of the story.
For me, it is going from a very enjoyable story to a grind to read and that really makes me sad.
I started this series last knight and have hit the wall where I have no choice but to wait please please not too long
ps love whats going on hoping for many more long chapters before the end !
I have thoroughly enjoyed what I have read so far. Your development of characters and plot line is excellent. Erotica is an ancient and somewhat lost art form, and you are giving it the richly deserved Renaissance that it fatly deserves.deserves.