by Meridian13
OK, I said you needed to make longer Chapters, but not just about sex. Yeah, I know; where are we reading it? Really, the chapter is longer and is still good, but some scenes are zipped through that could be fleshed out more (expl. Marcus walking into the antique jewelry store) Things went by too fast.
AMAZING!! I love the slow caring sex with the girlnervous but w such sweet guys. I read the other chapters but this is my favorite besides the other mating with trinity. Can't wait to see what happens with Alex , u should do a story about Alice since she has the same scars but a really sweet wolf. Anyway I'm so glad I found this story. Keep writing, it's so hard for me to find stories like this. Much love, A