All Comments on 'Finding Mr. Wright Ch. 09'

Very well written, an excellent story.

"I am so sorry, Sir. I won't let it happen again," I said, words coming through my staggered breathing, as I tried to recover. "I will never doubt you again."...

I am enjoying this story, but have trouble understanding how the relationship transitions from the physical (lists of things to do or not) to the metal (punishment for disobedience). Most of the run-up at the club and Brooke involved the physical. Should Elizabeth trust him the very first time they are interacting as dom and sub so much that she deserves a punishment for not waiting? I admit she did not wait much time to see if he would return What if he had been gone an hour? Ten? I guess there is some point where obedience needs to break, although I'll admit she didn't give him much time.

I have always struggled on punishment. Not that it was so harsh here, but where is disobedience "real" vs self-protection and genuine concern? He did, to his credit, say up front that obedience was his one requirement, and I thought it was too simplistic that she so quickly stumbled, but I guess the broader question of BDSM as something that is focused on the mutually gratifying physical (spanking for fun, or other kinks) vs. this sudden (albeit not unexpected) turn to submission and punishment always throws me for a loop. It is unfair for me to pose this from a story, but the characters are realistic enough that it got me thinking. I sudpect would have safeworded and said "yes you can punish me, but not for that -- my worries were legit, it was not trivial disobedience". It would make for a fascinating followup discussion between the two characters, but that path is rarely seen in stories. Maybe I just don't get it as I am not a sub, but I wanted her to stand up for herself.

Good story with good characters. Keep it up!

Anonymous - Thank you very much for the long and well written comment! I understand what you are trying to convey. My thoughts here are several. First, Elizabeth is very insecure, so her first thought was that this guy would leave after he got what he wanted. I actually had this happen to me for real when I was younger, so it's a bit of an autobiographical incident. I later found out that he left because he was embarrassed and scared, but that didn't help my self-esteem for quite a while. Second, Elizabeth is trying to understand the difference between pain for punishment and pain to enhance/modify pleasure. A longer discussion between Elizabeth and Aaron might have been better, but I didn't want the sexual energy/tension to decrease while they discussed things. If I were able to re-write it, I certainly would change it up a bit!

Female power found through surrender. Your detailed narrative is a joy to read.

I released a breath taking moan and then he kissed me 💋

Oh the sensation those words evoke! So stunning and descriptive.

All of your readers are inside Elizabeth’s head, well written.