by leeanna19
This is a nice little story.
If you have ever been in Dan/Dani's shoes ( Heels ) you may remember your own feelings in a situation like this. I know I can relate !
Poor Joe, Lucky Joanne ! I remember feeling like a freak early into my public display of my femininity as i too am 6' 2" tall and love wearing sexy heels. Though back then I was 75 pounds lighter.
Like these lucky gurls, I found several others who were actually males who wanted to and did fit in as females. And to find a born female who was glad to offer help was like finding a golden treasure.
There are a couple of typical foo paws in this writing. Some readers might not catch them.
But, my being a very slow reader I am amazed at some of the stuff I find that escaped the writer's quick scan as well as a proof reader's scrutiny.
All in all i totally enjoyed this little snip it of a story.
Unfortunately I also remember encountering Jackasses like the "Drunken Mates" of this story.
Rather an unnecessary evil to be reminded of, but they do add reality to this story.
Write on Leeanna !
You got this Gurl !
Sure, make me cry why don’t you <3
I love Mandy and would love to hear more about her girls. I wish I could meet a Mandy.
Sorry about the mistakes. I write and just want to put it out there. Need a volunteer proof reader.
I met a "gurl" once 6 ft plus. Ugly guy but after wig and makeup looked amazing. Probelm was she liked heels. So on the way to 7ft with her 6 inch sandals.
I have seen guys on contact sites and chatted then. No idea of makeup, but then again nor did I. It's just the pain you see in their faces knowing they may never be accepted. My heart goes out to them. I'm 5'9. So not too tall for a woman. I usually wear flats to not stand out.
Mandy & Dani are adorable. Absolutely a wonderful story and I cannot express how much I love this story as well as part one. I was wrong in my comment on part one when I suggested that the story end there, you keep writing. Now I am looking forward to the next chapter.
You have captured real life feeling & emotions with this story, it is not something everyone can do. 💋💋💋
Veronica
Thanks Veronica. I'm so buy at work ATM. I just get home and veg out. I have put an older story on which should show up soon x
I saw your new story on my list. It will be the next story that I read. Thanks 💋
Veronica
I understand completely, no pressure, your story is much too good to be rushed. You live a difficult clandestine life that I can’t imagine how hard it must be 😢. I sincerely hope that some day things can fall into place so you can fulfill your life’s desires. 💋💋💋
Veronica
Thanks Veronica. I'm totally closet. Only my mother knows. My family have no idea. All my writing is done when I'm alone Hence 1000-1500 words.
Just stopped by to let you know that I was thinking about you, hope all is well.💋
Veronica
Love the story. Wish I had the courage to transition. I hope you continue the journey and let us know how you want it to go. Great story
Thank you so much for this story. As a pre-everything trans woman, I get so sick of all these trans stories being a chaser’s wet dream. It’s really nice to see our stories being told by ppl like me.
Please Please continue Dani’s story.