All Comments on 'Finding My Place'

Was no erotica in this story at all. Should have at least some form of sex in the chapter. I like the concept but this wasn't even a full chapter

Just no.

Not an IR fan.

Gee! People are so critical! I thought it was an interesting introduction to your story. (The spelling does leave a lot to be desired, though.)

Looking forward to further developments!

It’s leading to something, I promise. I wasn’t happy with my first attempt at writing so this is my attempt to start over. I’m severely dyslexic so editing takes significant time and I don’t have much time to dedicate to write to begin with. This was 5 pages in Open Office. I thought that was a good start. Thanks for all the feedback, I will try to make the next installment which is already about half done, longer and more thoroughly edited. However, I don’t understand the downvotes for the fact it’s interracial. I wasn’t even planning on making it such necessarily. I was just thinking of a way to describe Noah and decided he was black. Not planning on making it a sexual reparations story or ever a bbc fetish story. They just happen to be of two different races.

I thought you paced it about right . Your style of writing is great and I enjoyed the story I hated stopping and wished you had carried on ..

Dawn x

Good so far when do they change Devin into a girl and train her to please her man . I would love to be abducted and changed into a girl. Please continue this story

yes do continue and devin does find a way to get out of there and brings back the authorities and people are arrested and charged with kidnapping

im not sure i understand why they have to abduct people. i mean, i can think of two dozen trans women off the top of my head who would gladly fight each other over an opportunity like that.

Story is abandoned by author after 3 chapters