by FreyaGersemi
Your story exquisitely reveals the emotion and physical sensations of a young woman discovering her sexuality. We feel her wonder, her thrill, and the intense need glowing within. I can't wait for the exploration to continue. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Maydaypilot, well, if I keep getting such encouraging comments as I have been, the exploration WILL continue!! 😁
Outstanding!!! Your stories have it all. Character development, emotion, love and lust with some foreshadowing. Please continue writing. I love your work!!! Thank you!!!
What wonderful and refreshing writing. The build up and the descriptive intensity of Freya's desires took this to another level. Beautiful and brazen at the same time. How Alex didn't come as Freya sat on his cock.,. That left me wanting more!
Thank you, everyone!! I absolutely LOVE reading comments!! 🥰
@francisball, you wrote "How Alex didn't come as Freya sat on his cock..." I thought about that, but then realized that "Story Freya" would have been pretty upset at the wasted cum, so... Alex had to control himself for a little while more...
Another great story. Story Freya is just so horny.. Alex doesn't know what's in store when they finally find the right time and place.
Very well written (of course)!
@ManosHands, keep reading!! 😉 And thank you for calling the character "Story Freya." Some readers miss that distinction when talking to me!!
A great twist on a rite of passage, Story Freya's actions in the cinema were sexy as hell with a hint of dark. Alex did well not to cum, believe me!
@Anonymous, I'm guessing that you're the same reader that has read and commented on my first two stories, also. I'm so glad that you are enjoying them!! And thank you for commenting!!! 😊