All Comments on 'Fire in the Belly Pt. 02'

Entrancing and unusual.

I was concerned that a second chapter could not continue the excellence of the first. Turns out my concern was misplaced. A wonderful fantasy so well written. With the promise of more? Once a year is a punishment for us. Please return, soon.

Beautiful, sweet story.

Made sense from start to finish. Excellent flow. Caerwyn, you sent me to the dictionary a few times. Thank you for expanding my vocabulary. I'd seen the word _epitaph_ used before, but I always thought it had a negative connotation. Surprise, surprise! ☺

Good two-part story, with a definite possibility of future chapters. Another commenter hopes for more, as do I.

A well done sweet fantastical story.

Caerwyn, you sent me to the dictionary a few times. Thanks for expanding my vocabulary.☺

Another commenter hoped/hopes for a continuation. I wholeheartedly agree.

Well-written and very hot! I’d love to read more. Maybe he could expand his harem, or we could learn a bit more about the nature or origin of his abilities? Well done and thank you for sharing your work.